Talk:Orange Star

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I've started a "History" section for OS, but I have a few comments/queries that obviously don't belong in the article.

First off, I'm not really happy with the way I phrased the first sentence in the section. "Prior to the start of the RP" sounds too out-of-continuity for me, but I really can't think of a better way of wording it without sounding like a retard. Someone with a better grasp of language, please fix it. :p

Secondly... well, now that I think about it, that's about it. I've added pretty much all I know about Orange Star's military history in the RP, and I might add a bit later about pre-RP stuff, like Red Valley, but I'm relying on others for post-Zephyr stuff. I never kept reading up after I left the RP for the first time, so I don't have a clue.

EDIT: Oh yeah, suggestions for other subsections under "History" would be good. Or, hell, do we even need to divide the history section up?

~ River 02:13, 22 August 2009 (UTC)

• I'd give each major conflict OS has been involved in a subsection. One part to remember for pre-RP is part of Viola's history - part of her loathing of Orange Star comes from when she had to work with them in a counter-terrorism op. Details are on her page. Nebula 17:51, 24 August 2009 (UTC)

Relationships Section

Please can it be beefed out some more? One word on each doesn't really suffice, and open/closed borders should be mentioned. JoJo 07:50, 4 January 2011 (PST)